3rd June,1787
Ello me name is John Hatcher im on the ship and it is REALLY boring and I hate the heat and where neally at Tenerife.You would think that it is good that where are neally there but we have to stay on this bloomin' ship while those rich people and marines and whatever get to go out there.(three days later)We actually get sometin good for once! We get to have fresh food from the bloomin' captain but the thing I don't like is that he is only doin it because he wants us to be strong so when we reach Botany Bay we can be his slaves.
loved the cockeny type words ...........................................................................................AMAZING. Zac
ReplyDeleteHi. This is just a correction and I'm not being mean, but at the start of the entry I think you should put a commer after ello, because it just sounds a bit fast. I also liked the cockeny alot and it your thing was amazing!
ReplyDelete.Matthew