3rd June ,1787
You must remember me, I'm Ann, All the convicts are hot, stinky, hungry and dying to get out of the hull, we have hardly any air . We have just leaving Portsmouth were and going to Tenerife .We got in Tenerife and one convict tried to escape. The marines just put him back in the cell and I'm in the same cell as him I don't know iz name .Us convicts are not alloud to go out of hull it's stinky in here .When I try to the loo the bucket just moves .Tenreife is warm it's not to hot in Tenerife because the more hot the more pen and ink .
Brodie;in the fifth line you iz instead of his and in the seventh line you have put to l's instead of one l for aloud but i really like your blog .good job
ReplyDeletebrodie ; In the fifth line you have iz instead of his and in the seventh line you have two l's in stead of one l but good blog
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